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Re: Two of my Poems
That would be a really awesome poem to see! Unfortunately, even though I love micheal jackson, I don't know very much about him (or any famous person, for that matter. ...
Nov 6, 2009 -
Re: Two of my Poems
Just like the first one, I'm reviewing this as I'm reading it, so please pardon any confusing comments and stuff on my part - I'm not very good at it ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Two of my Poems
Hey, Vandria (cool name, by the way =3) Ok, I'm going to write two reviews for this (one for each poem) just so that you don't have to read one ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Live Dream Live
This is good! =3 One of the problems I had with it is the format - normally people write poems and songs like this: i should tell u about everything ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Birthing Complications
This was good - no, great! I love the concept of it, and how funny it was. XD The beat for me was practically non-existent, but that didn't stop me ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Crevice
This is good! I had a problem with finding the rhythm, or beat, to it. It just wasn't a very clear one. However, some of the rhyming was great! Whereas ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Your Doppelgänger and You
Black Night Werecat, to get the a with the umlaut above it (ä), hold down the ALT button on your keyboard, and press 0228 on the number pad. If you're ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: A Witch's Journal: Foretelling (1)
I get where you both are coming from - and I think I know why its such a crummy work job. Since I usually write during lunch/recess at school, and ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: A Witch's Journal: Foretelling (1)
A Witch’s Journal: Foretelling Barren. That was the first word that came to Karen in her dream. A barren wasteland. Here, the earth was so dry that cracks stretched and ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: A Dragon's Personality
Gee thanks June - after reading the second review, I thought I was going to cry. You seem to be the only one who likes it. I put it up ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: A Dragon's Personality
*I'm a little obsessed with dragons, so...* A Dragon's Personality Strength and heart, Wise and smart, Intelligent and knowing; Claws and scales, Tooth and nail, A Dragon it is to ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: what if much of a want was to know?
First of all, before I continue with this review, I'd like to mention the 2:1 ratio rule - in order to post a story or poem of your own, you ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Faith
Snoink is right - you should try to add a little more power to you poem. It's a really great poem, the concept is awesome, however, you really shouldn't be ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: They say-I say. Rewritten
Omg, I totally agree with this poem! I feel like this all the time! Just one question though: I'm not sure if I understood this poem correctly, because in the ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Your Doppelgänger and You
Just wondering, anti-pop, but how did you get those two little dots above the "a" in doppleganger? I've never been able to figure out how people do that! D:
Apr 30, 2009
